Sunday, March 4, 2012

change

wrote this in a comment on a blog about change...
dear change,
are you the mistress, or are you the wife?
are you the broth, or are you the spice?
are you the hammer? or are you the knife?
not permanent as death, but evolving.. as life
:)

8 comments:

  1. Beautiful!
    I wish I could write poetry like this.
    One thing I found out is 'Change is female' :P

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    1. freudian! :P
      thanks a lot for stoppin by!

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    1. ty ranjana, sometimes extempo works :)

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  3. Take off the last line in the brackets...the poem cuts it well (pun unintended) :P, you don't need to explain the hammer/knife thing. Take it off, and this one's a masterpiece. :)

    How's it going, bro?

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    1. dude! thanks!!! its goin good mostly.. n seriously.. your blogs jus keep gettin better and better. readin your posts is like a ritual i do everytime i go online

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  4. for an orthopod...hammer ain't no tool for destruction!

    Jokes apart, nice one Manan...how did I miss this one!

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