wrote this in a comment on a blog about change...
dear change,
are you the mistress, or are you the wife?
are you the broth, or are you the spice?
are you the hammer? or are you the knife?
not permanent as death, but evolving.. as life
:)
Take off the last line in the brackets...the poem cuts it well (pun unintended) :P, you don't need to explain the hammer/knife thing. Take it off, and this one's a masterpiece. :)
dude! thanks!!! its goin good mostly.. n seriously.. your blogs jus keep gettin better and better. readin your posts is like a ritual i do everytime i go online
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could write poetry like this.
One thing I found out is 'Change is female' :P
freudian! :P
Deletethanks a lot for stoppin by!
Good one.
ReplyDeletety ranjana, sometimes extempo works :)
DeleteTake off the last line in the brackets...the poem cuts it well (pun unintended) :P, you don't need to explain the hammer/knife thing. Take it off, and this one's a masterpiece. :)
ReplyDeleteHow's it going, bro?
dude! thanks!!! its goin good mostly.. n seriously.. your blogs jus keep gettin better and better. readin your posts is like a ritual i do everytime i go online
Deletefor an orthopod...hammer ain't no tool for destruction!
ReplyDeleteJokes apart, nice one Manan...how did I miss this one!
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